Spinning naked, dizzy, wet
bare feet on tile floor.
Dripping puddles
in the shapes of body parts.
Shape shifting pieces of myself
left to pool and gather,
releasing heat in rising steam.
Like that game hot lava
that we played as little kids.
Leaping over cooling puddles,
but pretending they're still hot
to avoid the obligation
of cleaning up my shedding skins.
I used to see my feet.
They weren't particularly nice,
calloused and rugged,
but still feminine (most of the time)
As I've aged, they seem to be retreating.
Though I can still see them,
it is with effort.
I do a dance around my stomach
for a clear visual.
When I do look at them, I worry.
I worry about the spider veins
and convince myself that I am diabetic.
I worry about the hair on my big toe
and how it seems to darken each year.
I worry about stained heels.
Is it really a good idea to wear sandals
with those pants?
Most of all, I worry about kankles.
I worry about becoming someone's joke,
an easy target for a cruel new pop
For years I listened
to the busy chatter, talk
of a Charlie, Oscar
David or Edward. Their names
echoed through a single speaker,
riddled with particles of dust
I never tried to clean.
A black metal box
whose dial never moved,
my father’s static lifeline
to a city outside of a country road.
It became my background
noise, a spoken coded broadcast
meant for special ears, not mine.
Still, I listened
to a dispatcher who skipped the obligatory
Hello, how are you doing, to police
who spoke of people and problems in names
and numbers, to emergency personnel
who rushed from place to place
without the chance to ever look back.
And I heard
the
So We Can Experience Nature by leesuhmarie, literature
Literature
So We Can Experience Nature
I will claim that I can count the stars,
and you will disagree, we will compete
until I win because you let me.
And I will take your hand in mine
dragging you to the dark depths of the desert
where we’ll lie in the dirt with the itching crawl
of insects beneath our backs.
And we will think about the houses we abandoned,
the things inside we worked so hard to buy,
and I think we’ll agree that this is worth it.
And then we’ll hitchhike across state lines
in the bed of a pickup, with the rolling exhaust
clogging up our lungs. And we will choke down
the fumes with the sweet smoke of a rolled cigarette.
The interstate moo
In the cold silence, I
can almost hear the praises
of my neighbors, wrapped
in blankets with furnaces ablaze.
I’ve seen them peek through
windows, with doors locked tight;
children itching to sneak outside
and parents unwilling to give in.
On the frozen balcony, I
stand, waiting for the splitting
blinds, the stream of light, shattered
by faces of youth trapped behind
frosted window panes.
Trickling from the willow tree,
the last remnants of a day, outside
of the ordinary, natural
colors twinkling white like static
on the television screen.
And though the sky quit long ago,
the tree still bares the weight
on its shaky twisted limbs,
Oh, tiny human. I can hear you in the next room over. Your voice echoes off the walls, along with an occasional thump. I've grown to know that there is a 3 second window with you. A bang, crash, or thud, and then 3 seconds. I hold my breath for each of these moments, each time. And I know that if there are no cries of pain within those moments, things are just fine in your little world. I can hear you chanting hi-yaws and ka-pows so I imagine that you have taken on some force beyond my adult recognition. From where I'm sitting, things sound to be working in your favor in there. Though I want so bad to interrupt, to join the game and come to y
For years I listened
to the busy chatter, talk
of a Charlie, Oscar
David or Edward. Their names
echoed through a single speaker,
riddled with particles of dust
I never tried to clean.
A black metal box
whose dial never moved,
my father’s static lifeline
to a city outside of a country road.
It became my background
noise, a spoken coded broadcast
meant for special ears, not mine.
Still, I listened
to a dispatcher who skipped the obligatory
Hello, how are you doing, to police
who spoke of people and problems in names
and numbers, to emergency personnel
who rushed from place to place
without the chance to ever look back.
And I heard
the
So We Can Experience Nature by leesuhmarie, literature
Literature
So We Can Experience Nature
I will claim that I can count the stars,
and you will disagree, we will compete
until I win because you let me.
And I will take your hand in mine
dragging you to the dark depths of the desert
where we’ll lie in the dirt with the itching crawl
of insects beneath our backs.
And we will think about the houses we abandoned,
the things inside we worked so hard to buy,
and I think we’ll agree that this is worth it.
And then we’ll hitchhike across state lines
in the bed of a pickup, with the rolling exhaust
clogging up our lungs. And we will choke down
the fumes with the sweet smoke of a rolled cigarette.
The interstate moo
In the cold silence, I
can almost hear the praises
of my neighbors, wrapped
in blankets with furnaces ablaze.
I’ve seen them peek through
windows, with doors locked tight;
children itching to sneak outside
and parents unwilling to give in.
On the frozen balcony, I
stand, waiting for the splitting
blinds, the stream of light, shattered
by faces of youth trapped behind
frosted window panes.
Trickling from the willow tree,
the last remnants of a day, outside
of the ordinary, natural
colors twinkling white like static
on the television screen.
And though the sky quit long ago,
the tree still bares the weight
on its shaky twisted limbs,
Oh, tiny human. I can hear you in the next room over. Your voice echoes off the walls, along with an occasional thump. I've grown to know that there is a 3 second window with you. A bang, crash, or thud, and then 3 seconds. I hold my breath for each of these moments, each time. And I know that if there are no cries of pain within those moments, things are just fine in your little world. I can hear you chanting hi-yaws and ka-pows so I imagine that you have taken on some force beyond my adult recognition. From where I'm sitting, things sound to be working in your favor in there. Though I want so bad to interrupt, to join the game and come to y
ODE TO BAX RAFTER. (1979 to present) by SootheNoo1959, literature
Literature
ODE TO BAX RAFTER. (1979 to present)
Fast Pace
Dirty Bass
Stomping Feet
Naive Beat
Raucous Shouts
Words With Clout
This Is What Its All About!
Attitude
Creates A Mood
Young And Proud
Whistle Loud
Bounding Boys
Make A Noise
Moshing Men Find Their Voice!
Bright Light
Dance Floor Fight
Back In Time
Pure Sublime
On The Ball
Warts 'n' All
No More Backs Against The Wall!
Fast Pace
Dirty Bass
Stomping Feet
Naive Beat
Raucous Shouts
Words With Clout
THIS IS WHAT IT'S ALL ABOUT!
She's a walking skeleton -
hollow bones and water-eyes
that have long dried up,
starving fingers that go
tap,
tap,
tap,
against the desk, she
reaches with bony hands
for a bit of hope, but
she's always disappointed,
left shaking in a skin cloak
stretched tight over her ribs,
she's starving to death
but not from lack of food,
she is dying from a lack of love.
(I prop her bones against the wall
'cause I don't know how to raise
the dead to life,
I don't know how to help her)
She was so tiny next to me
That I felt like I might break her
Simply by holding her hand.
She assured me that she wasn’t
As fragile as I thought she was,
But that was hard to believe
When my thumb and pinky
Could meet around her wrist,
And I left bruises there
By holding just a bit too tight.
i. Apogee
Make light -
cast it on your face like a spell.
You tell me things
- murmur and crackle.
You are another station
beyond the fuzz of this city
and science.
Appreciate roads
how far they run
and
what they touch.
Step into the firmament
- please
on steps of shade
and eyes
staring at the poor earth.
ii. Perigee
Walk with purpose
towards
anything.
A magnet has come to town.
Breathe on me -
turn to face your halo.
Shimmer.
Your arms on my back,
chest to chest,
yours on yours.
Watch the hands on the clock
stroke.
Frame pieces of me with your hands.
Times bend to you.
I'm slipping -
hold on.
i yell at the clouds between sunrise dreams
their whispy constellations forming unresolved patterns
that hide and wink with conspiracy
"the devil is in the details"
she said,
but her voice is more whisper than sound
and I wonder if she was ever really here
i climb into bed and close the sheets behind me
to lock away the day
hiding my fears behind the substance of sleep and repetition
"identity is not who you are"
she said,
"but what you do"
and her voice is more thought than whisper
and I wonder if she was ever more than me
Echoes of feelings stir up thoughts
Thoughts and stale ambivalence
It's a wonder I can still taste it
Passion's spice upon my lips
Memories brush over old scar tissue
Like a finger caressing warm skin
Old ghosts stir fresh musings
And musings spark modern possibilities
Aged romanticism has it's own kick
Not unlike a bottle of smooth whiskey
Eventually the bar becomes a pedestal
One more reason to tread softly
How strange to revisit old warmth
To have it racing through your veins
Reverberating even in your secret self
Sparking a flame of times past
I can taste the fire of years gone by
But only for a moment before it's gone
Old passion
they would never put someone like you in a movie by consolecadet, literature
Literature
they would never put someone like you in a movie
furtive
in the cafeteria
out by the crab apple tree
startling at passing headlights
taking the 80 bus the opposite direction as usual to get antiseptic and shears at Sally's
90s zine style sign
small stack of 20s
Ziploc bag of Reese's Pieces
tall glass Dollar Tree jar full of scissors and combs
you just can't keep your big mouth shut, can you
stardust in the sheets. by littleblueraccoon, literature
Literature
stardust in the sheets.
tonight I'm gonna
pull down the sky,
throw it into my bed,
and strip it naked.
but I'll make it slow
and quiet.
I'll add just enough
warm touch
to make it seem sincere,
breathe in just enough life
to make it feel secure.
I'll whisper that I love it
and hold it tight, tight, tight
before I turn away from it,
let it memorize my back
as I fall into
dreamless sleep.
Writing is my passion. Throughout the years, writing has followed me from adolescence to adulthood and my love for it has never faded. Though I did not choose to pursue writing as a career, I continue to invest in strengthening my skills as an artist. I have been fortunate enough to pursue my other passion, helping people, and currently work as a youth and family therapist. Thank you for reading. I look forward to continuing to grow as an artist and as a person and I definitely appreciate company along the way.
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